Post by Lux Divinus on Nov 16, 2013 19:49:04 GMT
Please while role playing use third-person, preterit tense narration in one of two ways
[Example 1]
Lux Ran through the narrow corridor and slammed into the gigantic wooden door on the opposite end bashing it in, " Are you alright?"
[Example 2]
Lux Ran through the narrow corridor and slammed into the gigantic wooden door on the opposite end bashing it in, as he said "Are you alright?"
[The only difference is example 1 is talking without a general idea of who's talking being that it's not need. <do this when it is a simple sentence> most of the times example 2 is better to use]
Do not do this
[Example 1]
I ran down the dark corridor and slammed into the door breaking it it. "Are you alright!" I screamed.
[although it sounds clear it is much harder to write first person with more people posting in the same tread so stick with third person]
Sometimes you have moments when more than one of your characters are in a thread and you don't want to log into the other character account. There are two ways of going about it, you can try making another if you wish.
[Example 1]
Lux smacked a hoe and said "Yolo bitch."
Naomi watched from her chair and giggled a bit, "I feel like that was uncalled for..."
[Example 2]
Lux did the sprinkler while in the rave party, "whoo this is so much fun!"
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Naomi's moves were just as good, if not better.
PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Write more than a sentence in your replies. Writing only a sentence makes responding very hard. Also, one more thing, please use full English and grammar conventions unless your character is supposed to speak "X" language and/or has a very exaggerated linguistic style.
normal->[Example 1]<-normal
Naomi said as she combed her fingers through her hair, "what will we do today?"
exaggerated->[Example 2]<-exaggerated
It was 12 am Saturday night and Naomi needed to get to the bar..."Okay her we go," with a simple thought of the form, she became her neko form. "Letttttttssss GOOOO!"
[Example 1]
Lux Ran through the narrow corridor and slammed into the gigantic wooden door on the opposite end bashing it in, " Are you alright?"
[Example 2]
Lux Ran through the narrow corridor and slammed into the gigantic wooden door on the opposite end bashing it in, as he said "Are you alright?"
[The only difference is example 1 is talking without a general idea of who's talking being that it's not need. <do this when it is a simple sentence> most of the times example 2 is better to use]
Do not do this
[Example 1]
I ran down the dark corridor and slammed into the door breaking it it. "Are you alright!" I screamed.
[although it sounds clear it is much harder to write first person with more people posting in the same tread so stick with third person]
Sometimes you have moments when more than one of your characters are in a thread and you don't want to log into the other character account. There are two ways of going about it, you can try making another if you wish.
[Example 1]
Lux smacked a hoe and said "Yolo bitch."
Naomi watched from her chair and giggled a bit, "I feel like that was uncalled for..."
[Example 2]
Lux did the sprinkler while in the rave party, "whoo this is so much fun!"
-----------------------------------------
Naomi's moves were just as good, if not better.
PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Write more than a sentence in your replies. Writing only a sentence makes responding very hard. Also, one more thing, please use full English and grammar conventions unless your character is supposed to speak "X" language and/or has a very exaggerated linguistic style.
normal->[Example 1]<-normal
Naomi said as she combed her fingers through her hair, "what will we do today?"
exaggerated->[Example 2]<-exaggerated
It was 12 am Saturday night and Naomi needed to get to the bar..."Okay her we go," with a simple thought of the form, she became her neko form. "Letttttttssss GOOOO!"